Responses to "a letter to a heartless landlord"
Monday Oct 13 1997
<mconley@scopus.com>
I admire you for sticking up for your rights and I completely understand
your frustration. I hate to be knit-picky, but since you brought up the
grammar issue, I wanted to offer you some advice.
I think that your letter would be a LOT more effective if you eliminated
the sarcasm. You should try to sound a bit more professional. Also,
a more effective way of getting your point across is to make statements,
rather than ask so many open-ended questions. Give the answers,
don't ask them.
This is constructive criticism - please do not be offended.
Thanks,
Mary
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